Scrawled 5: Burning Passion page 40 WIP

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I think one of the hardest challenges for me is pages with a lot of dialogue; making room for all that text while making the direction readable but still coming up with different shots of the characters can be rough. This was a satisfying page to make though, slowly trickling in some development for Asi, but I also came up with a new story element while making this page. Wonder if anyone can guess the hint in here! We're wrapping up this chapter so just a few more pages to go!