Update on a sketch before I ink and color it

There are changes I wanted to make and things I wanted to tighten up before I continue

Took roughly 4 hours of editing to get things to how I felt I wanted things to be

Instead of surprising everyone like last time I wanna show the sketch of the changes and see what everyone feels about it

I will do both long and short hair versions but I wanna take my time on this and make it reaaaaal stylish and pretty

Here is the old one for comparison and a gif for a quick back and forth