The Milk Bearer - rough pages

Hello dear Patrons! ?

Here's a few pages of a mini story sequence, about the Milk Bearer. I want to introduce this character that will become important later on and I will integrate these pages into a future chapter. I am not satisfied with the style and color job I've done on the chapter 11.5 first pages and I feel like I need to keep experimenting for a style with the colors. I'm planning to do unique speech bubbles for each character (these on the rough pages are not final, I may also add more text) and work more on the panels appearance for them to be more appealing. But more importantly, I think I need to simplify my lines and be less realistic in the colors and focus more on appealing palettes. My focus with colors has always been to try to be accurate but it is just not compatible with my comics without spending extra hours coloring. There's something I do wrong that I need to change in my workflow. So I want to do this mini story first because this can be a good test before getting back to the main story, while offering a nice breast expansion sequence ?. The final pages will be in colors ?

Also available in the tier 3 dropbox folder. Final pages coming soon!

Hope you like! ?