Marcella Santiago: Peak Performance first 12 pages done!
There you go! 20 minutes before midnight, GMT +1, so as far as I'm concerned that means I released it in the weekend, given I still have Great Britain, Portugal, and the entire American continent behind me :P
Again, got in my own way with re-editing pages, churning out new renders for other pages, rewriting the dialogue, restyling the way I did the dialogue bubbles, because that's just how I roll. I like to do a 180 on everything in the last possible minute and make my own life miserable, haha.
That said, this is good. I'm happy with it. There's really not any sex in this, but if you wanted story, you've got it! There's Marcella reflecting on her relationship with Kayla, there's Kayla reflecting on Marcella's nature, there's allusions to other sets that I've decided to incorporate into the story after all, there's brand new story, there's the introduction of new girls, I mean... as far as starting setups go, this is good.
Next comic I'm already introducing one of those four girls. I don't wanna spend a lot of time creating an entire sex scene between Kayla and Marcella, unless I have time to spare and like the idea. I wanna advance the plot. Kayla will have a small appearance in the pages after this, but not a huge one. Read the comic to figure out who'll be introduced next.
Hope you guys like it!
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