Little Willy | Page 102 | Lines

Might have a few incoming tweaks, but I'm pretty happy with this one.

There's been a hell of a lot of build up to this, I hope it feels worth it! Despite the reader having an insight into Cody's inner monologue, Willy has been pretty much on his own. This second kiss has a different sort of weight to it

The dialogue flow is a bit awkward on that last bit, still gotta think about that




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