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Bells?

I don't often like to use sound effects in my comics. I'm still not sure if I will in the final version of this page; let me know if you feel some way about it

The pacing of a page without text is hard to control, but the reader should feel/hear the quiet sounds of the forest along with Roshim, disturbed at last by a sound that doesn't belong there

I'm half tempted to add another panel to the top row, to show Roshim's relaxing eyes. He and the reader should not feel that he fell asleep

Also, I forgot his necklace! gotta add that




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