Roses For Avalon | Page 133 | Draft

Bells!

I'm worried that the pacing on this does't work without being drawn out to another page. Roshim sits; he becomes aware of the symphony of nature; then he hears a tone that's out of place with nature. That's what I want to convey to the reader, but somehow the passage of time doesn't satisfy me here

Though it's not a theme that has emerged yet, music and singing are something that I've planned for the next chapter, so I think it's fitting that Oidecalla is introduced with a sort of discordance; not disharmony, but something certainly out of place in the natural world