Roses For Avalon | Page 118 | Draft

This transition might need some work! I don't want to show the rest of the prayer; it's necessary to move things along and let Roshim and Avalon spend some more time with each other before the end of the flashback

Maybe I need more of a transition with roshim and avalon getting off the elevator or riffing with the fellas first before they get to Roshim's room? Gotta think on it! Let me know if you have any thoughts




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