Roses For Avalon | Page 117 | Draft

I'm not 100% on this page reading well; the point is for the reader to capture, just for a moment, a hint that Avalon has a personal association to this pantheon that the group is praying to, and to close out the scene

I was thinking about merging page 115 into this page. I ought to have done that and avoided some redundant imagery in this draft. Perhaps it can be salvaged!




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