Roses For Avalon | Page 110 | Draft
But here we are!
Whew, this draft is old and needs a rework to make sure that text flows well! These conversation-heavy pages are tricky.
A little more is peeled back as to the nature of Roshim's community. The nature of these flashbacks should always be to reveal some surprising things and show Roshim's connections to home, which should help the reader understand the burden he's carrying

