Roses For Avalon | Page 102 | Lines
Long, meaningful pause
Avalon's bit of dialogue "Down there?" to imply there's room to sit beside him is a bit clunky. Can't think of a good way to rephrase yet
Roshim is self-serious and passionate. Avalon is not, but he knows how to respect Roshim's moods. A lot of Avalon's character is feeling bemusement and letting things happen, such as his interaction with Guile. The reasons for this will be explored!

