Roses For Avalon | Page 41 | Draft
Jolan reminds Roshim of someone
Roshim dropped this hint on page 31. We don't know much about Roshim yet, save that he's traveling, he throws a wicked punch, and he likes boys, and one in particular. But more important than the details, these pages have built up our sense of his character, and how he relates to other people.
I felt strongly I needed to establish Roshim as his own context before introducing Avalon, who above all else is disruptive

