Roses For Avalon | Page 28 | Draft

Whew, this one needs some work!

Some of the dialogue is clunky here, might have to give it another pass. That last bit by Leily feels like a bit of a non-sequitur, though it's supposed to be a clear remark on the scars that Leily is seeing again 

The point of this page is to establish a bit of background while Roshim lets Leily get closer. I'm sure that like Leily the readers will have questions!





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