2025-11-18 03:00:36

Hansel And Gretel Storyboard First Draft!

Heyo everyone! Here's a first time post, a comic storyboard! I had the inspiration while riding my bike through the park at the start of October. I came home and immediately drafted this 28 page comic from the inspiration, while the idea was still fresh!

I was thinking about how I was scarred at a very young age by a spooky fairtytale VHS that had a Hansel and Gretel. I barely remember it, and it was scary for like a 5 year old so it probably wasnt that scary, but it stuck in my mind regardless long enough for me to be thinking about it at 26. So, I decided that I should probably make something based on that.

I think I did a pretty good job, although I passed it by a friend and he said that I should put more development into the family at the start, and give the father some additional background. In my opinion though, the father is a terrible person and I barely even wanna draw him myself. I wanna know what ya'll think about that too.

I think I might make multiple storyboards for comics and then next year we vote on which one gets worked on? I've been contemplating how to make voting better for me and I think that making it be established ideas rather than new ideas from scratch would be best.

Thanks for reading this, I'm gonna go pass out now because I'm struggling to keep my eyes open as I write this. Woke up at 4am today /cry