Roses For Avalon | Page 55 | Draft

And as mysteriously and erotically as he first appeared, Guile goes!

The next page will show more of Roshim's motivation for NOT fighting, which is mostly that he's concerned for Leily's safety. I might work a bit more into that inner monologue to show that he's ready to fight but for the fact another person's safety is on the line

Although it's the right thing not to risk another's safety, Roshim will still feel resentment towards Leily for being the thing that keeps him from fighting. He doesn't realize Leily is the reason for this break-in; something that Avalon will understand immediately




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