Roses For Avalon | Page 43 | Draft

The end of the brief interlude! It should convey the distance and longing that Roshim experiences, wanting to be close with this person again

This page isn't speaking to me right now, and you can see how incomplete it is. The dialogue is good, but I need to think of a way to tie it all together. 

Since their conversation turns towards the stars, I think I need to give most of this page over to the sky. The last 3 pages have slowly given themselves more and more to the stars and moon; this page might work as the capstone to that