Roses For Avalon | Page 7 | Draft

Leily speaks his mind!

This page needs some major rework. The point is that kitchen boy Leily gets an eyeful of Roshim, but I wonder if that establishing shot needs to be beefed up a bit more.

One of the tricky things about a fantastic setting is more time has to be spent on establishing the environment and I think I gotta pay more attention to that! 

Leily's design also needs some work. I'm gunna spend a day or two tinkering with that. I think a kitchen fella would wear something around his forehead to keep hair out of his eyes, but Leily should be stylin