Roses For Avalon | Page 4 | Draft

And with our opening shots of the main characters done, the prologue chapter begins!

We get an establishing shot of the city where Roshim and Avalon are. I'm inspired by Assyrian architecture, so I'll be doing my best to create an off-brand of that.

The next scene is Roshim sitting at a pub counter. The ant has wandered into one of the coins on the counter as Roshim counts out his meager purse, but it won't be clear until the next page. I'm not sure if I should fold some of that draft into this page so the entire idea is conveyed cohesively. 

One of the challenges of doing a web comic is the desire to cram all the content possible into each individual page, whereas a full comic often feels better when the content has some room to breathe. I gotta find that happy medium!