wip

detailed doodle of this project page (not the comic I'm working on, just a single page for other project), at the end i used the rejected version for a maybe 2 pages mini-comic, also decided to remove the kiss part as it was going to make the page too crowded, so decided to give more focus to the main intense action (if once colored can be added maybe i will but i think it won't work as good as i thought because will share and steal frame with the main one (but sincerely i wanted to add it hahahaha, maybe i will add it in the main frame if anatomically possible)

i think is ready to start working on the detailed sketch

some details will be added or slightly modified in the detailed sketch

update: decided to do add the kiss within the main frame characters it looks better and fluid, now is ready to start sketch detailing