MJ/Miles NTR [Sketch Preview]

Hey folks,

I know you're probably tired of hearing this at this point, but I wanted to share a sneak peek at another project I've been working on on the side. I can't overstate how inspired I've been the last month or two, and how frustrating it is not to have all hours available to work on this stuff that is burning up my mind. But I've recently become obsessed with this project in the same way I was with Hipster Chicks, so I'm hopeful I should be able to focus on it and knock it out fairly quickly before getting distracted by something else.

I guess you could say I'm on a bit of an NTR kick right now. Between this, Hipster, and the Bang My Bully prequel, I've been really into the notion of a longer-form NTR/temptation/cheating story. One of your fellow patrons recently turned me on to the work of NTRMan, who has done a series of games including Seasons of Loss, which I was spectacularly impressed by. I would love to do an adaptation of one or two chapters of that game at some point, if anyone is familiar.

But for now, my mind turned to something a little more fandom-adjacent -- a Mary Jane / Miles Morales pairing. If anyone has played last year's Spider-Man 2 game for PS5, you know Peter's struggle with the symbiote and the disruptions it causes in his relationship with MJ are a central plot point. Maybe I've just got a twisted mind (who am I kidding, I definitely have a twisted mind), but as I played the game I was struck by how little romantic chemistry Peter and MJ seemed to have, and how MJ's casual friendship with the younger Miles (she regularly calls and texts him) seemed a little... suspicious. Add to that the fact that Peter's failures and inadequacies are amplfieid by the symbiote's selfishness, while Miles is kept fairly clean, and that as the game goes on Miles ultimately has to fight and defeat Peter (spoilers), literally proving his superiority, and I couldn't help walking away from the game feeling that it was fertile ground for an NTR plotline.

Skip ahead to now, after the release of Hipster Chicks and my recent obsession with TheTalkMan's work, and I've been really drawn to the notion of doing a longer form cheating story that centralizes the crumbling relationship between Peter and MJ, and his complete obliviousness as MJ drifts toward Miles and becomes more and more romantically entangled with the younger Spide-Man. A comic, unlike some of my other work, that takes place over a span of weeks or even months, more grounded in emotional reality, with little vignettes like:

•  Peter coming home and finding MJ and Miles "discussing the spider-bot tech"

•  Peter and MJ watching TV while MJ texts someone and giggles

•  MJ saying she has to go to the Bugle and turning down Peter's offer to give her a ride.

• MJ starts dressing sexier but is never "in the mood" when Peter is

Anyway, as you can tell, I've got a pretty good idea of what I want this story to be. The one thing I'm missing right now is an ending. With Peter being corrupted by the symbiote, and MJ regularly stepping out to fuck Miles, I'm not sure where it all ends. Maybe Peter comes home one day and just finds a note and a ring? Maybe Miles has to fight and defeat Peter like in the game, and it ends with MJ embracing Miles while Peter looks up defeated from the ground?

Sound off in the comments. Is this the kind of story you'd like to see more of? How would you write it to end? What other scenes would you want to see in the comic? 

Cheers!