self-study ?

trying to see if i can draw eyes differently by redrawing a few recent gura drawings.

before (left), after (right)

#1 ??? - https://cacoethes.fanbox.cc/posts/5341843

#2 ??? - https://cacoethes.fanbox.cc/posts/5438316

#3 ??? - https://cacoethes.fanbox.cc/posts/5463551

general changes i tried to make are as follows. not sure if i will continue doing it this way or not:

1. sharpen inner eyelid corners

2. soften outer eyelid corners

3. give her an eyelash