Monday transparency report

Hi guys!  This week I’ve been working on the university section of the Lifepath, and also the general structure.

The Lifepath currently has 77 planned “beats” (each one representing 1 or more passages in the game).  5 of them need the most work; another 8 need editing; 64 are done. 

This has been so much work, but it’s nearly ready.

“Don’t get discouraged because there’s a lot of mechanical work to writing. There is, and you can’t get out of it. I rewrote the first part of A Farewell to Arms at least fifty times. You’ve got to work it over. The first draft of anything is shit.” –Hemingway

I am not trying to write something as good as A Farewell to Arms, it's mainly just A Farewell to Clothes for our plucky heroine. But there are just a few parts that still need to be worked over, because they're still shit. But it's nearly not shit. 

I'm going as fast as I can and working on it every day. My plan for tomorrow is to fix the first pink box on the grid and turn it green. I'm gonna crash now and get back to work on it first thing tomorrow. ?❤️‍?